Nancy
If  love should
seek me 
Here 
So deep within the earth
Offer me 
A life I never dared to dream
Would I accept her gift
Or 
Hide my hands
Pretend 
Indifference
If love brought her song
Here
Deep into the earth
Would I try the notes
Or 
Pose 
Mute
Determined in my silence
If love sought me
Here 
So deep in rock and earth
Like April’s rainy fingers
Seek the sleepy seed
 Foretell sun’s
invitation
Would I bury my soul
Beyond her reach
Shun  
Her touch 
The chance to live
If love pursued me
With dreams and songs
And hope
 Past the forests
of my fear
Through twisting tunnels 
Caverns undiscovered 
Never giving up
Until 
She found me
Here 
Deep 
Within the earth
 I might
I would surrender then
Love
Come for me
for Hank

 
 
8 comments
Oh. I've told you this already, but now this is my favorite. I love how you find the words to express the unsayable. You do it every time.
C.
Carole, thank you. You know how hard it is to even read your praise but it goes right to my heart. Thank you. N
Oh, I so love this. You've got the essence of them so well...I keep thinking I should have seen this onscreen.
Beautiful job,
Krista :)
Krista, your kindness overwhelms me. Thank you for finding something nice to say each time I put something here.
Love,
Nancy
Oh Nancy! This one is so very special, you have captured his feelings so well, and the last lines,
Love
Come for me
are filled with such hope and promise! Outstanding!
Hugs,
Linn
Vincent surely would surrender for Catherine would find him.
You truly create so much from few words. What a gift you have to tell their story!
This one is lovely. :-)
Linn, thank you, for these kind words and for your friendship. I'm really glad you liked this little effort. Love, Nancy
Thank you, Brit, for always, always being so loving with your praise. You honor me beyond what I could ever deserve. Thank you. It means a lot that you found something to like. Nancy
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